eternal #2

prayers wrapped
in the wet paper-towel.
the phantom pain
in the barbwire’d eyes.
flatline’d existence
eludes
like a sand between
the fingers of the time.

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2 thoughts on “eternal #2

  1. this is beautifully sad, the wording is perfect. the mood conveyed so well it is palpable. you are very good at these small poems. it’s not easy to convey a full thought of depth in so few words. this touched me.

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